Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4 - Page 33

Originally posted by: Susegad

Hmm, Now Romeo and New Juliet. I hope the new means no tragic ending for this pair.🤔

That's a promise this time. 😃

The title reminded me of Taylor Swift's "Love Story"😃

It's a love story, baby, just say yes! 😳

"Feel at home." He smiled sweetly.

Now why can I clearly see the sly cunning beneath that, oh so sweet smile

Because there is. 😆

I am liking PJ more and more with every action.😉

And it's becoming a challenge for me to keep it that way!

I loved how he just took over and threw a curve ball at her.

Atta boy!! Keep her on her toes. Point one goes to Maan.😆

@Bold: Avi wants exactly that to happen. 😆

I half smiled at his nonchalant reminder of the past. "You remember." He blinked and his expression altered for a moment before he leaned back against the seat.

O f course he remembers. And that right there tells us a whole lot about his thought process without you having put it in words literally. It's fun trying to figure out what he might actually be feeling.

But this point goes to Geet.😉

That is actually a beginning of the revelations of Maan's side. Of course, a lot of gaps will still be there until he fills them himself.

"Of course." He smirked. I did not reply and in the quiet of a few seconds, his eyes scanned me. "I like that shirt. It suits you."

And the ball is back in her court with that one.😆

This is just awesome. Fluster her before she flusters you.

Definitely this one goes to Maan.😉

@Bold: Righto! 😆

But on a whole the best part of the update was when Geet says,

"You don't look that bad yourself either!" 😳

Goes a long way to show how much this Geet has grown from the IOYSM one.

I give her a thumbs up for this one.😃

Exactly! She has come a long way from the one he used to be in IOYSM and that's going to be shown a lot in the future chapters. 😉

This update was definitely a game well played out between these two.😉

I'm seeing possibilities of them working together, so let's see how you bring it about.

As for Vyan, since Maan is here, there is no hope for him but to be friend zoned. So I'm not really minding him that much.😉

Really? I clearly remember how you gave a biased view about hating Vyan when he first appeared. I wonder how it changed so easily with just one appearance from Maan. 😆

Awesome and a zingy update Mayyo. I loved it

Thanks Mayyo.

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Thank you Apa! 🤗

And I loved reading the ping pong game you created with these two by being the referee. 😆