Hey,Amazing update dear,First of all,Glad to read that finally the yash chapter is over..And after that u described whole dance competition sequence and also as a duo added with SwaRon sweet romantic scenes..Now the character of Manvi is really sugary sweet..I like her as a catalyst between SwaRon..Loved the way She make sharon to realized her love for swayam..I liked the understanding of swayam..In short,SwaRon relationship is beautifully penned..So such a sweet read i enjoyed..
I am looking forward..So do update as soon as ur comfort
Thanx for the PM
Prateek
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firstly sharon realised her love fr swayam which was very beautifully penned n the competition was very nicely penned her sharing stuff n the cute vid chats were blissfull
all in all a very interesting movement in swaron's life
This was their routine..Sharon sometimes called him or vice versa...
One day... Swayam n Sharon on Call...
Swayam- Sharon...I am sorry! Sharon- Kis liye? Swayam- I'll be back after Holi... Sharon- Whatt ! Swayam... holi ke baad???? Swayam- Yeah... I can now just try..but... Sharon- It's okay... work is more important... Swayam- Next week...Holi... Sharon- Are chup na! Vaise Video chatting pe aa rahe ho ki nahi? Swayam- No...nahi...ho payega aaj... Sharon- Par kyun...I.. Swayam- Kal? Sharon- Okay as you wish... Swayam- And what're you doing? Sharon- Studying for the last exam...Wed ko hai... Swayam- Okay...means festival ki tayaari ke lie more than a week hai... Sharon- Hmm...ghar mein hi programme hai... Swayam- Ohh mei... *pain* ouch... Sharon *tensed*- Hey! Kya hua...? Swayam *relaxing*- Umm..nothing...wo bas..I banged my hand on the bed's corner... Sharon- Sachhi bolo...it was so unconvincing... Swayam- Are I am okay...Sharonn..
Renuka called Sharon from Kitchen. Swayam- Go Chaachi is calling...talk to you later... Sharon- Hmm...yeah...Skype par...
Before she could complete Swayam disconnected the call. Renuka entered her room... Sharon *thoughts*- Yeh video chat ki baat karte hi why is he acting weird, huh..hope he is okay!
Renuka- Kab se bula rahi hun... Sharon gave no response! Renuka- Sharonn! Kya hua???? Sharon jerked when she tapped her shoulders. Sharon- Haan...wo mein exams ke bare mein soch rahi thi. Renuka- Are Nandini ka phone aaya tha... exams ke baad unse milna...wo tumhari shopping karwane wali hai... Sharon *smiles*- Ohh...a...acha hai...I'll go...
*** After Dinner, Sharon slept... Since she had a day gap now till Wednesday... she was at home...
The other day, she studied for hours and then messaged Swayam. "Wanna talk to you, come on Skype...plz..." He replied "Bit busy Shar..." She sighed "No excuses..I want you now...nahi to baat mat karna mujhse..." He replied "Acha fine..."
Swayam finally came face to face... it gave a shock to Sharon when she saw him... her eyes widened... Swayam just simply sighed.
Sharon *shocked*- Swayamm!!!! Yeh sab!! Yeh bandage...tumhare forehead pe...! Tumhe... Swayam- Accident... Sharon- Yeh kab hua?? How this...all...n??? Swayam- Day before yesterday... Sharon- What the hell Swayam! You didn't even tell me?? How this happ... Swayam- Listen Sharonn... Sharon *rude*- Shut upp! Pehle btao yeh hua kaise ? Swayam- Mein and ek friend Branch ka hi...we were coming back from the Meeting, he was driving... wo Car ke saamne one bike zoomed at a high speed...the friend applied the brakes but I actually got hurt because my head hit a big glass slab... and he too got hurt... Sharon- Greattt! Seat belt nahi the kya???? Swayam- I wore that but all in vain... Sharon *stern*- Okay...bike in speed...but tum log bhi speed mein hoge...tab hi you got a hard jerk... Swayam- Sharon..tum... Sharon *concern*- Not a word now!! Tumhe khud ki thodi si bhi care hai ki nahi??? Kahin aur laga?? Swayam- No...and yeh bhi minor hai...nothing much... Sharon *shouting*- Great Mr. Shekhawat! Ya to tumhe khud ki care nahi hai...ya meri koi parwah nahi hai... itna careless kaise Swayam!!!! How can you!! Swayam *with patience*- I am sorry Sharon...but humari bhi to galti nahi thi na ais... Sharon- Swayam khali road par zaruri nahi hai ki vehicle itna fast chalaya jaye!! Swayam- Sharon...samjho na... Sharon- Tumhara accident hua... fine it was minor... par tumne mujhe btaya tak nahi na Swayam... Swayam *calming her*- The reason iss.. Sharon *tears forming*- Tumhara chat pe nahi aana... ignore karna uss baat ko then pain hua to jhut bola...Swayam that small pain did hurt me...I understood there...the reason was lame... you thought Sharon ko pata hi nahi chalega...huh... Swayam *angry too*- Bohot ho gaya Sharon!! Now just keep quiet...I beg! Sharon- Yeah yeah why not... tumhe jo karna hai karo... Jis bhi way mein London mein rehna hai haa raho... enjoy!!! Yahan tumhare liye concern dikhana bhi tumhe pasand nahi hai... wahan to koi concern care karne wala hai hi nahi... koi bolne wala nahi hai na... stay there then! I don't wanna wwaste my time here... No need to talk... Swayam- Wohoa! Okay...nahi aata wapis...haina...fine Sharon...you feel I am enjoying na...yup! Jo sochna hai wo socho... bye!
Both disconnected the call.
Swayam was angry, furious... Swayam- Itni choti baat ko issue bana diya in a minute... lets see kab tak nahi karegi baat... *injury pain* opppsss... shit...damn the pain... huh...
He kept his lappy aside and sat on bed resting his back on the wall.
*** Sharon, here, was upset, tensed, angry, disspointed...the reason did had point. She was not in her senses...she didn't know what to do... She was about to throw her phone when Gautam ran to her and held her hand... she immediately looked at him and stopped.
Gautam- Sharonn...what happened beta? Sharon- D..dadd...wo bas... Gautam- Study tension..? Sharon- Uh..y..yeah yeah! Gautam- Relax...sab thik hoga...and I am here to tell you that apni shopping ki list ready rakhna..Holi ke baad... you'll get more busy na.. Sharon- Sure..dad...
He left. This was all witnessed by Maanvi. She came to her...
Maanvi- Okay Mam, where are you? Sharon- Don't know... Maanvi- Mood kyun off hai? Sharon- Studies hai na ...tu jaa yaar. Maanvi- Gussa kis baat ka hai...? Sharon- Huh...yaar tu... Maanvi- Jiju ko phone karti hun... sab mood thik ho jayega... Sharon- Swayam! No way! Koi zarurat nahi hai usse baat karne ki... Manvi- You both fought..! uff! Sharon- Usko khud ki care nahi hai...dusre kare to problem...ab forhead pe lagi hai...usne btaya nahi... baat chhupayi and for him he is right...meine thoda bol diya...London mein rehna hai wahin rahe...I don't care... Maanvi *thought*- Accident?! Surely zyada nahi laga hoga tabhi Didz ne ghar mein kuch bataya nahi hai... Didz se baad mein baat karti hun..first let me call Jiju...
*** Maanvi called Swayam. Maanvi- Hello Jiju... Swayam- Haan Maanvi...hey. Maanvi- Kaise ho aap? Swayam- I am fine... Maanvi- Hmm..aur aap... Swayam- Wo Sharo...umm...n Maanvi- Didz gussa hai...jaise aap ho... Swayam- Let it be...wo ek baat pe kuch zyada hi react kar rahi hai... Maanvi- Frankly! Aap kahin na kahin wrong ho... wo to chahegi na aap usse kuch na chhupao... Swayam- Use tension na ho isliye I didn't ... Maanvi- I know...but just think this from her POV... Swayam- Okay..but she even should understand... Maanvi- You know her the best but why not in this case..? Swayam- I'll see...but what about her exam? Maanvi- Book saamne hai...but mann nahi hai... Swayam- Hmm..okay... Office mein guest aaye hai...bye... Maanvi- Hmm bye.
***
Later at night. Maanvi- Didz have the food... Sharon- No means no. Maanvi- Jiju se complaint karti hun na...fir dekhte hai kaise nahi khaati khana! Sharon- Haan kar de complaint..mujhe koi fark nahi padega... you got that..!
Tears could be very well seen in her eyes... she controlled herself from letting them out.. Maanvi wanted to cheer her up but nothing happened... it turned the opposite way!
***
Swayam kept thinking about their convo, Maanvi's words... and then he realized what he did was a mistake... he realized he himself was wrong... he spoke rudely...he didn't even calmed her down...but messed up everything by talking rubbish...
Swayam *thoughts*- Actually I am wrong... Sharon to mere bare mein soch rahi hogi...and I talked so badly... mein uski care, concern ko nahi samajh paya... she is right...meri fianc hai ofcourse use tension ho rahi hogi... I am sorry! And upar se London mein rehne ka bhi keh diya...arghhh I am foolish..Sharon's dumbo...!! God! Plz uske exam par iska koi effect na ho...plz...Dammitt...
Swayam called her but no one picked up... he tried calling several times...but no response.
Swayam *to himself*- Great Swayam Shekhawat.! Tune ache se usko hurt kar diya...
***
Sharon was in her room only..her phone rang one more time...it was Swayam's only... she kept her phone aside after cutting the call. Swayam then called Maanvi.. he told something...and it made Maanvi smile.
Next Day; Sharon's last paper.
Maanvi- Didz... yeh apke liye... Sharon- Kya hai? Rakh de...I'll see later... Maanvi- Yeh Novel hai...Jiju ne bheji... Sharon- Kal hi bheji hogi... Maanvi- Um..w..are nahi...jaise har gift bheja Jiju ne time par...vaise hi yeh bhi bheja hoga na... kal kyun bhejenge... Sharon- Haan thik hai... Maanvi- But...exam ke pehle...Novel? Sharon- Kal exam khatam ho rahe hai...wo yaha nahi hai...he knows I love Novels...so bheji hai...I'll read after exam! Maanvi- Ohh..wow!! Nice...
Maanvi texted Swayam- For a sec she guessed you sent it tomorrow...but I handled. Btw she knows you so well... the reason as to why you sent that... :) Swayam replied- Lucky to have her in my life. Really Sorry for what I did. Maanvi- Everything will be fine. TC.
***
Finally, Exams came to an end... Sharon n the gang (Swayam only missing) decided to enjoy...they were having fun when Vicky made a plan of going to some place...
Sharon- Guys! I'll leave...you all enjoy... Simmi- Humare saath chalo na...for sometime... Sharon- Frankly speaking...mera mann nahi hai...Swayam is also not here...I am missing him a lot..so... please...Sorry everyone! Rey- No sorry...It's okay... you go.
Sharon came out and found Maanvi with her Car... (Key driver gave) , she was talking to Swayam on phone...
Swayam- Just keep your phone ON... wish to hear her voice... Maanvi- Yup! She is coming bye. Swayam- Hmm.
Sharon sat in the car and Maanvi started driving. Maanvi- Finally! Exams over... Sharon- Yupp! Maanvi- Didz...apko pata hai Jiju ko apse baat karna hai... for once talk to him na... Sharon *stern*- I don't want to! Maanvi- Aap bhi samjho na...aise thodi hota hai... Sharon- Listen... I care for him, I am hell concerned... that's why I spoke...little shouted...was that wrong??? Maanvi- No...it was not...but Jiju ne bhi kuch soch ke hi... Sharon *tears fell*- Okay! But Maanvi... you tell...kya mera itna bhi right nahi hai Swayam par???? *sniff* Do I even have some??
Swayam heard all this...he felt guilty...shattered... for what he did...
Maanvi- Didz... no tears please... please... Sharon- Tujhe kya lagta hai...I don't miss him?? Maanvi, Swayam jitna mujhe miss nahi krta ya karta hoga... usse zyada mein use miss karti hun... Maanvi- Didz...ek... Sharon- No! The day he'll be here...infont of me...may be tab usse baat kar paungi.
Swayam couldn't hear more...he cut the call and wiped his tears...
Swayam- I messed up everything... something has to be done..and I can't leave it like this.!
Maanvi- Didz...wo bhi apko bohot miss karte hai... Sharon- I love him...Maanvi...I just can't live without him... Maanvi- Didz! I know..now stop ghar aa gaya...shh...
Sharon n Maanvi came out of the car... Sharon wiped her tears...both hugged...and then went home.
amazing update as usually dono shi h yr apni jgah ... sharon want dat swayam share everything wid her poor swayam messed up instead of consoling her...
hope swayam usse console kare...
loved it
this story is going gr8 yr u r one of my fav writer...luv u alot TM 🤗 i wish mein bhi teri trah story likh pati...don't noe how u manage story nd study together yr... hats off 🤗
I must say the story is going on a good pace... not too fast not too slow and the detailing of this ff is really good. Keep writing the and rock it!!:)
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