Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: anaghazaya
Awesome tanu di
First part mai he confession
It was fabulous
Really amazing
Continue soon
Thanks for d pm

Haina? Meine likha tha, accha kese na hota?
Just kiddin'. Thank u so much Anagha!

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Haina? Meine likha tha, accha kese na hota?
Just kiddin'. Thank u so much Anagha!

😆

sahi kaha di aap ne kuch likha aur voh accha na tha aisa kabhi ho saktha hai kya

My pleasure 😊

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Amandeep

@aman1605

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hey Tanu🤗

Fantastic start😉

The bet reminded me of Armaaan n Ridz🥺

Plz continue asap😳

Tnx 4 pm Sumi😃

Love Aman❤️

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ZayaHarshika

@ZayaHarshika

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Sorry guyz..
Really depressed with BI ending news...
Will update tomm

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oriyu

@oriyu24

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ZayaHarshika
Sorry guyz..
Really depressed with BI ending news...
Will update tomm

it's okey..
will wait

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ZayaHarshika

@ZayaHarshika

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Hey..
Sorry i had to update this on sunday only but i couldnt due to some reasons.. I'd decided to update it on monday but thn the news of BI ending came out which shattered me to peices.. I couldnt bring myself to write something.. I was too depressed.. Hence i couldnt update...
After BI ends idk what'll happen but one thing is for sure... I'll keep coming here n keep writing more abt ZaYa.. We'll always be together!! 😭

Obviously it wont be as good as tanya's update.. But phir b..
Happy Reading!

COLLEGE

Aaliya : Tum Mujhse what??*she couldnt believe her ears*
Zain : mei tumse mohabbat Karne laga hoon aaliya... Pata nahi yeh sab kaise huwa.. Kab huwa?? Mujhe khud pata nahi chala..par ab .. I cant live widout u.. Tumhari aadat si hogayyi hai mujhe.. Tum paas nahi hoti toh ajeeb sa khaalipan mehsoos hota hai.. Tum jab paas rehti ho toh aisa lagta hai jaise ...
Aaliya : ab tak kitne ladkiyo ke sab bol chuke hai Mr. Zain abdullah?? Ek baar dhoka khaa sakti hoon.. Baar baar nahi*starts to leave*
Zain : aaliya meri baat toh suno... Mei sach keh rahaan hoon*holds her hand*
Aaliya : Mera Haath chodo Zain
Zain : Nahi chodunga... Jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi kardeti tab tak nahi chodunga
Aaliya : zain leave my hand.. Mujhe jaana hai*tries to free her hand *
Zain : Nahi*tightens his hold*
Aaliya : i said Leave..*she pushes him with all her strength n has tears in her eyes.. She leaves *
Zain : Aaliya.. Aaliya.. Meri baat toh suno*goes behind her*
Ayesha : ruko Zain..abhi woh bahut upset.. Woh abhi kuch nahi sunegi... Na tumhe maaf karegi.. Usse thoda waqt do...*stop him from gng*
Zain : Par Ayesha...
Ayesha : Tumhe Aaliya se Mohabbat kab huwi??
Zain : bahut din pehle.. Bas mei accept nahi kar rahaan tha.. Aaj kar rahaan hoon...
Uski aankhein.. Uska meri taraf pyaar se dekhna... Mujhe daanta... Mujhse jhagda karna.. Mujhse irritate hona... Uska hasna.. Uski baatein.. Uski zulfei... Pata nahi mujhe kab deewana kargayyi*smiles*
Ayesha :tumhe toh deewana kargayyi... Par ab meri behn ka kya?? Usse toh lagta hai ke tum sirf apni bet puri kar rahe the
Zain : Main manalunga usse.. Thode nakhre dikhaayegi.. Gussa karegi par maan jaayegi.. Kyun ki mei jaanta hoon... Woh mujhse Mohabbat karti hai*smiles*
Ayesha : dekhte hai Zain Abdullah
Zain : dekhlena*leaves*

Abdullah Mansion

Zain : Kaise Manaao Isse?? Bahut gusse mei lag rahi thi.. Ek kaam karta hoon... Usko call karta hoon
Aaliya : Hello
Zain : hello.. AaliyA..*she cuts the line*
Kaat diya??mera phne kaat diya?? Koi baat nahi.. Phone kaat diya toh kya hoga.. Uske ghar chala jaata hoon...*leaves*

HAIDER MANSION

Aaliya : uski itni himmat...bet jeetne ke baad bhi mujhe call kar rahaan hai..idiot.. Mei is aadmi se khabhi baat nahi karungi*angry*
Ayesha : Aalu... I'm sorry yaar... Meri baat toh sunlo
Aaliya : di aapne yeh acha nahi kiya mere saath...zain ka phir b samaj aata hai..woh hai hi aisa par aap?? Mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi*goes to change... She comes back wearing a black loose mid- thigh tee paired wid black angle socks .. N her hair on one side..*
Ayesha : ik maine aur zain ne tumhare saath bahut galat kiya.. Par aalu..zain really loves u.. Tere jaane ke baad maine dekha woh kitna upset aur worried tha tumhe lekar*aaliya goes towards d dressing table n starts applying lotion on her hands*
Aaliya : di plzz.. Mujhe uske baare mei koi baat nahi karni
Ayesha : aise kaise nahi karni?? Karni padegi.. He really luves u aaliya.. Maine usse aaj tak kisi bhi ladki ke itna tadapte huwe nahi dekha..*aaliya just stares at her..*
Aaliya : di plzzz... Mujhe padhna hai..*takes her black nerdy glasses from d dressingtable n wears it.. She sits on her bed n pretends to read*
Ayesha : aalu.. Aalu*aaliya dosent respond.. She goes away ... Tring tring*
Hello
Zain : Ayesha.. Mei tumhare aur aaliya ke kamre ke neeche khaada hoon... Mujhe aaliya se milna hai.. Andar kaise aao*luks at their window*
Ayesha: what??pagal ho tum?? Itni raat ko?? Mom dad dono ghar par u stupid..
Zain: aaliya kahaan hai??
Ayesha : Apne room mei
Zain: aur tum??
Ayesha : living room me
Zain : wahi raho.. Mujhe aaliya se akele me baat karni hai
Ayesha : okay but be careful.. Uska mood theek nahi hai
Zain: okay!*takes a ladder n starys climbing... He jumps inside n luks at aaliya... She luked drop dead gorgeous.. Her hair messy.. Smudged kajal.. With her nerdy glasses.. Her long milky white legs.. He kept staring at her*
Aaliya : tum?? Tum yahan mere kamre mei kya kar rahe ho??aur yeh kaise andar aaye tum?? Pagal ho tum??*starts screaming*
Zain : ssh shhs shh*pins her against a wall n covers her mouth wid his hand*
chup ek dum chup.. Mujhe tumse baat karni hai... Aur ab sirf mei bolunga aur tum sunogi...

I know maine galti ki hai.. I know maine tumhara dil toda hai but trust me aaliya.. Mera aisa koi intention nahi tha.. Mei .. Mei kab tumse mohabbat karne kaga mujhe khud nahi pata chala.. Aur yeh sab jo maine kiya woh sirf bet jeetne ke liye nahi tha.. I luv u aaliya.. U really love you... Mei tumhari aankhoun mei yeh aansoun nahi deksakta.. Khaas karke tab jab inki wajah mei hota hai.. I'm really sorry..*holds his ears.. Aaliya has tears in her eyes*
Aaliya : zain nahi..*moves his hands from his ears*
Zain : tumne mujhe maaf kardiya??*aaliya dosent respond*
Kardiya nuh... Mei jaanta hoon kardiya..*aaliya smiles*
Aaliya : haan kardiya..
Zain : toh theek hai.. *comes on his knee and removes a daimond ring from him pocket..aaliya is shocked to c zain like this*
So Miss Aaliya Ghulam haider .. kya aap apne Kitkit Urf Zain Abdullah se Nikaah Karna chahingi??*smiles*
Aaliya : Zain abdullah.. R u proposing me??*shocked*
Zain: haan.. Ab jaldhi batao.. Haan ki naa...*aaliya is too shocked to respond*
Haan ya naa..*stares at her*
Aaliya : haan*has tears in her eyes.. Zainslips that ring onto her engagment finger .. Gets up n hugs her tightly..*
Zain: toh kal mei apne parents ko yahaan tumhara haath maangne bhejunga.. Tumhe koi problem toh nahi hai nuh??
Aaliya : nahi..*blushes*
I luv u zain
Zain : i luv u too*they hug*

Next update By tanya 😃

Edited by ZayaHarshika - 11 years ago

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Amazing part !!
Zain ne propose kiya ... :)
Zaya together <3
Continue next part soon !!

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Again fast forward stop...AWESOME update SUMI...

Loved ZAYA KITKIT as always...can imagine that happening...AAWWW..those cutiepies...

So Ayesha is playing a big role here...up next...will ZAYA marry??

Cont ASAP...waise title se lagta hai there will be a catch...😆

Thanks for the pm...

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mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

awesome update.finally aliya accept zain.thanks for pm.we all are sad about show end so soon but plz don't leave forum and writing on ZaYa.keep writing more on them.