True Love Never Dies Collab SS TR_MN_KR (Hiral) & Pd786 (Praneeta) - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ANURADHATAAREYS

AWESOME UPDATE

AND SPECIALLY SONG SEQUENCE IS AWESOME
UPDATE SOON


thanks anuradha
I'm glad you liked the antakshari twist

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Posted: 11 years ago

hiral will update as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago

-Chapter 4-

It was ten at night now but everyone was still asleep as they were tired of the journey.They had almost reached Raj Palace. As they entered the gates of the palace Taani and Rey saw a dream or maybe a flashback.

Flashback

A boy was running inside the gate of a palace with a jhumka while a girl was chasing him to get her jhumka back.

G: Reyaan muje mera jhumka wapas karo.

R: pehle tum promise karo ki tum sirf aur sirf mujse shaadi karogi Tanisha naki uss Bandar Raj se.

T: mai promise karti hu.

They finally stop their Tom and Jerry chase.

R: waise ek baat batao ki iss jhumka me itna khaas kya hai ki tum isse humesha apne paas rakhti ho?

T: ye muje kisi bohot khaas insaan ne diya hai.

R: zara mujhe bhi batao ye khaas insaan kon hai?

T: Rehaan tum bhi na sab jaante hue bhi muje pareshaan kar rahe ho.

After their cute little nok-jhok they hug each other.

After they break the hug.

T: waise ek baat batao hum kab tak aise chup-chupke milenge?

R: jab tak humare families ke beech sab theek nahi ho jata.

T: aur agar ye kabhi nahi hua to kya tum muje chod doge?

R: ye kaisi baat kar rahi ho tum mai tumhe kabhi bhi nahi chodunga chahe mai mar kyu na jau.

T: please marne ki baat mat karo.

They get emotional and hug each other.

Flashback ends

Taani and Rey both got this flashback. Yet they couldn't see the two people's face.

Voice: wake up guys hum pohoch gaye.

Everyone opens their eyes to find Randhir trying to wake everyone up.

They stretch themselves and get out of the bus.

Taarey were the last ones to get down.

Meanwhile with Sandhir outside the bus.

As they both got down they bumped into each other

Taarey and Sandhir meet up with their guide for the trip. They were welcomed by some rajasthani ladies applying tikkas on their foreheads.

Guide: Aap logo ka yaha swagat hai. Aap sab

ko do-do ke pair me kamre me rehna padega as baaki saare kamre publically khulle nahi hai. So aap sab pairs decide kar lijiye.

Ra: Ok guys sab apne-apne pairs batao.

T: Me and Sanyu.

Saying this Taani and Sanyukta hug each other.

(In this whole journey Taani and Sanyukta had become very close friends by now they even shared their equations with their boyfriends)

Sh: Me, Neha and Vidhushi.

Sah: Mai, Jiggy aur Vicky.

Sw: Me and Parth.

Ra: then me and Rey. What say?

R: yup.

Precap: Palace Secrets and fun.


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Hope you guys liked the update.

Sorry if it was bad as while writing it i was studying for my Sociology test.

Plzz Do Like And Comment

Edited by TR_MN_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update hiral
flashback ko bahut acche se likha tune
i promise to update really soon
won't tell you to update coz i got to do that
thanks for the pm

PS : Sorry guys we will update soonest
Edited by pd786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What was this?? 1st you guys update after ages then you guys give this small update :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
Ohh flashback
its really mysterious
do write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye ch. tha ya promo
sry bt bbht chhotu sa tha

bt jo b tha bht mst tha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update
but it was too short
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Posted: 11 years ago
Adorable flashback Bronny!!!
It was so cute...
But small update.. :(
Eager to read more...
Update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Small and cute update :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)

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