Hey!!For starters, I would like to you tell you that I'm one of your ardent silent readers. I don't frequent the forum as often as I used to, so whenever I do, I make it point to check on my favorite FFs for any updates. Yours being on my hit list. So imagine my pleasant surprise when I found myself reading 5 updates in a row this time!!!!😃😛⭐️
Hence, no matter how lazy I usually am with my commenting, I just had to tell you how much I loved this progress to the story! Totally loved Arnav's angle on the situation. Initially you gave us a lot of Khushi's perspective, but with time you're introducing us to Arnav's psyche as well. Kinda reminded me of Pride & Prejudice, where the entire book is written from Elizabeth's perspective, showcasing Darcy as a haughty man with little to no participation in the dynamics, until the very end when first his actions and then his confession to Elizabeth actually reveal what he had been feeling all along. Really love the manner in which you have introduced to the reader the not so cold side of Arnav's personality, finally showing him to have felt just as much as Khushi all this while. It's like looking through a harsh outer shell, and realizing that the rock isn't solid, but merely an outer covering to something that is very much humane, and beating with every breath. Very nicely done, I applaud you for this feat.
Eagerly waiting to know what happens next. 😃
Love
Mirna⭐️
Edited by mirnalini - 13 years ago
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