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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

The Lunch ordeal:

Nice take on Arnav's support for Khushi in the presence of the ever formidable Dadi. What was especially commendable was that she had to accede finally and sit back at the dining table

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Nahi nahi:

Never would have thought that Arnav would sing. And you finished it with elan through Arnav admitting that the reason for his singing for that it was a special day for him😳

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Lost and found:

Ah the famous ASR anger. I would have liked to have something more to this drabble, but considering the time in which this was written, the end was justified

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Returning the favor:

Now this is what I call an apt way of returning a favor. Knowing Arnav, I did expect him to catch on to the fact that Khushi was in the same room; even so, I was startled when it was actually revealed.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

The fourth man:

I loved this alternate take on the events of Khushi's mehndi and Anjali's godbharai.

It was endearing to see Arnav's wistfulness and his recurring glances towards his soon-to-be wife.

This was had an underlying suspense to it which I liked very much

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Seeking support:

Arnav resorting to praying in front of an idol was a clear indication of the helplessness he felt over his sister's condition.

Nice idea!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Kisses:

Like the other drabbles, this one too brings out a facet of Arnav that should have been explored in the show.

Lovely!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Hide and seek:

It took me some time to comprehend what this was all about. It was nice to see Khushi provide him comfort through her words of assurance and an unwritten promise of support throughout.