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Fuggy Mehra

@..FuggyMehra..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

AWWW...it was amazing ..specially the last part?why does it have to b an OS..can we please have more..your n awesome writer buddy ...keep up the good work 🤗

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Syaza

@syazaibrahim

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Woww that was awesome!! I love the way you wrote it, its so beautifully written, can we get a part 2 please? 😊

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wonderful OS Aafrah! I'm constantly amazed by how fast you write and how much feeling you pack into everything you write. There's meaning behind every sentence of yours .

I really liked how you portrayed Pragya's crushing disappointment in Abhi. More than anything he has left her and their relationship down. I liked how you gave her a reality check and made her step back when irony of ironies, Abhi is willing to step forward now.

Thank you for writing this! Really enjoyed it!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wonderful OS!

I love fictions where Abhi realizes his love but has already dug his grave deep enough that he will still be stuck with Tannu (the bala that he brought on himself!)

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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice Aafrah, please write more? <3

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Ayesha

@NasreenAyesha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Purab making abhi feel his love iaso realistic
I loved it
Like minu said u can continue it by adding a results for both misunderstood
Bcoz u said future planning
But it is a irony twist in both life

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123456aliya

@123456aliya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Thanks ... For uploading this 👍🏼

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1029168

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

AWESOME afafrah dear
just amazing
i loved it..
😃
😃

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Thanks guys! For your kind words of appreciation! I don't intend to make this a TS though - but if incase I end up doing so - I will inform you all :)

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