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@awesumsonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

superb story visrom diiiii

hope they show such awesum episodes in d show

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Thx. Will copy this in a day or 2. meanwhile those who didn't read are welcome to read. I guess that includes you Shreya.

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Minionomaly

@Minionite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Aur Salunkhe. 🤣 I could just imagine Abhijeet saying that.

And then pulling Freddy's leg. Loved that. 🤗

Aww cycling and mountain climbing. Loving it!

Oh man...first Tasha, then Abhijeet!

I loved the investigation.

Great story Vis di!

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MoodyMango

@MoodyMango

Sparkler

+ 49

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

The story is awesome.👏👏👏

The conversation between duo is very good.😳 which we hardly see nowadays.

I loved investigation.

You are excellent writer Vis Di.

I hope you don't mind calling you Vis Di.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Thanks for reading and commenting Shreya and Hiral 😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Thank You who bringing back This Thread...😳👏

I really Enjoyed This Story alot...😆👏

Somehow having Fun Filled Investigation as Whole...😳👏👏

the Picnic Plan was Nice especially Imagining ACP Sir in Sports Shoes and Salunkhy Sir in Flowery Shirt...😉😳😆

Feeling Nice Reading about the Best Junior DUO as Vivek and Tasha...😳😳

the Cycling Idea looking really a Ride to Read...😳👏👏

even for a Moment I felt to Ride side by side with Tasha, OK in My Own Cycle...😆😆

The Accident was looking really Real...⭐️⭐️

Thank Lord, Tasha Safe...😳😳

BTW, Why Vivek or Tasha did not ask anyone before Lifting Cycles as There was No Board that the Cycle was Riding purpose etc...😕😕

I Loved that Tasha Phone Slips from Her Pocket and She used the Savior Number to Call ACP Sir...👏👏

now another Incident, little Scary...😲😲

the Mountaineering and that Extra Gear which Hang Abhijeet Sir on Accidental Road...😭😭

I really Like that Daya Sir and Vivek reached to Him when Students told Him about the Accident...👏👏

Freddie Sir showed His Sharpness was Wonderful...⭐️⭐️

Now, the Doubts started and the revealing of Manoj...👏👏

Nice Flick of Daya Sir to Recognize Manoj in a bit...⭐️⭐️

then the case turn to Other side with starting Investigation and the Scanning that Aluminium Rim used in Tasha Cycle...⭐️⭐️

Then, that Manoj House Search and got a Newspaper Cutting and after sending it to Sachin, take out More Info...👏👏

BTW, DII, Why Sachin was Not Participated in that Picnic Plan...😉😉

Shootout at Vivek at Resort...👏👏

Daya Sir and Vivek Chase and then Daya Sir Commented that He is Not Manoj...👏👏

again the HD Quality Picture Resend...👏👏

the whole News of Drug Racket...😲😲

the Vijay Voice remembered by Sharp Shine...⭐️⭐️

Vijay Arrest and Manoj Return...👏👏

All and All its a Very Enjoyable Story after ages I Read...😳👏👏

Thank You so much DII for such Lovely Attempt... 👏⭐️👏

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Thanks for commenting GD.

Why didn't Vivek and Tasha not ask anyone? I guess these little things can be taken for granted. Aur 5 saal pehle main kya likhi thi mujhe theek see yaad nahi. 😆

Why I kept sachin out? 1. I don't like battalion brigade. Esp when bi weekly started it was very irritating. 2. I remember they wanted some info to be sent from bureau. so someone had to be there. 😛

This is one story I really enjoyed writing. 😃

I had lots of time those days to sit and think in peace. part time job, less pressure.

Now I am not getting the time or mood.

Edited by visrom - 11 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: visrom
Thanks for commenting GD.

Why didn't Vivek and Tasha not ask anyone? I guess these little things can be taken for granted. Aur 5 saal pehle main kya likhi thi mujhe theek see yaad nahi. 😆

Why I kept sachin out? 1. I don't like battalion brigade. Esp when bi weekly started it was very irritating. 2. I remember they wanted some info to be sent from bureau. so someone had to be there. 😛

This is one story I really enjoyed writing. 😃

I had lots of time those days to sit and think in peace. part time job, less pressure.

Now I am not getting the time or mood.

jany kahan gaye Wo Din

kehty thy Meri Rahun mein

Stories Hum Khub Likh Payein gy...😭😭😭

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Secret

@Twilight123

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Lovely story di...😛.I liked salunke sir bringing his forensics ki. with him just like they all came with gun...👍🏼..Wow..I loved remaining and enjoying together... wish to see such scenes in the show..dil khush ho gya.loved Freddie and vivek cute nok jhok and duo reminiscing their mountaineering.....o really di,did Abhijeet slip during that scene from Man on the bus?...OMG..my heart was beating fast when the rope broke...😲

I liked the suspense...I was thinking that someone is trying to kill Abhi and tasha which was wrong...

I liked how team found the clue from the 11 years old newspaper with the help of that plane hijack article...very nice idea di...👏👏

Story was really interesting...⭐️

Abhijeet and Vijay's encounter and how our sharp cop recognizes him...wah...!!👏⭐️

I liked this criminal concerning for our officers as he wanted to kill only his target and helped tasha and Abhi.

Ending was nice...

Wow..di you wrote this story in 2010...is it your first story di...so wonderful

i had the same queries which GD already asked hence i got the ans so not asking again...😳