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Originally posted by: AS-Rifi

How's suraj inspired of ur kachori?😲

hmm..poora pagal hi tha! 😆

Honestly..i didn't like that "Spit it" dialogue😆...otherwise everything was fine😃

His attitude like " Jo karna hi Karo" 😛 thats inspired from my Kachori 😉
wo hindi dialog " ab ugal do " ki bad translation tha 😆 😆 😆. As I said imagining dialogs in english was 🤢 for me when writing. at same time I am not so confident on my Hindi ki I can write story ab jhelo bad translations ko 😛

Originally posted by: Mistic_Morning

most welcome BT😃
here is your another gift from ur Machli frnd😊



lekin Machli ko inna sa bhi Pankaj nhi chahiye😡 as her groom🤢
Machli Senior inspectors ka dewani hain jee😳
Machli ko nah Sharp Shooter hi chahiye 😃
yah toh Abhijeet yah phir koi nhi
zindegi kuyanri kat jayegi. lekin unke bina koi nhi... matlab koooiii bhi nehi😉

YUMMM 🤗 🤗 🤗
Only you understand Mao well in entire IF 😆
chalo then u will be matsya kanya forever 😛

Originally posted by: bluetides

His attitude like " Jo karna hi Karo" 😛 thats inspired from my Kachori 😉
wo hindi dialog " ab ugal do " ki bad translation tha 😆 😆 😆. As I said imagining dialogs in english was 🤢 for me when writing. at same time I am not so confident on my Hindi ki I can write story ab jhelo bad translations ko 😛

Originally posted by: bluetides

YUMMM 🤗 🤗 🤗
Only you understand Mao well in entire IF 😆
chalo then u will be matsya kanya forever 😛

are nhi nhi... Mao ko samajhne ka sara credit Pallot ko de rahi hain Matsya Kanya (God! kya naam chune ho aap😆😆) apki😉
apke Birthday stry likhne se pahele, main unse apki choice of food ke bare me puchi thi. unhi se jaankari prapt hui ke Mao Egg Curry bada pasand krti hain😛
aww... kinna sara hugs😳
thnk u😃 🤗

Cogratulations Mistic morning,shreya,BT di and GD 😊👏

@ Mystic,
awee tab toh GD chicken ke bare me nahi bataya hoga ... use jo khana hi 🤔
haan both mumma and baby are my fav 😛😆


@ Ani,
Thank you 😊