Drabble: Fanaah... Part 5B (LAST) Page 19 - Page 12

Originally posted by: navk

superb update
loved it
ending was quite unexpected
and i think it was rushed
loved it anyhow

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007

offfooo ek toh ittey dino baad update dia or oopar se yeh 😡

u know how much i hate this marne maarne type wali ending🤢

m a sucker of happy endings but no ...tum koi magic nahi kar sakti thi after ol u'r a gr8 writer

Originally posted by: Arjuhi_kk

Zameem pe na sahi...toh aasmaan m aa mil..
tere bina hai guzaara...aae Dil hai mushkil ❤️

That's all I can say...even though it seemed rushed..
(totally understand ur view) ..but u gave justice to this story 😃


Thank you completing it ❤️

Originally posted by: shalbi

I really liked the aay you kept it close tor eak, i mean he was dead and couldnt live, he had to go and they could only be together in some other world.

Liked it

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Part 5b
Beautiful update sneha
Such a heart touching ending
So sorry for being so late
But seriously you always reminds me I love your writing for a reason
Thanks for pm
Can we get an epilogue???