Bravery In Loss: A Poem - Page 2

I don like you. I don like your poems. They are too good. What the hell do you do? Your poems are such brilliant pieces. What do you eat before writing them? The emotions portrayal, the words and the flow is beautifully blended in. The title itself gives the chill of a the emotion filled ride ahead. The way you showed Kashi's pain is amazing.

You are a great poet Ramya! You should start publishing them. 😉 Trust me, crore meh bikne hai saree k saree.

Now keep writing such poems, all your amazing attempts to make us cry, which I would have done if the poem was a stanza longer.

Sam

you describe Kashi bai inner feelings, inner pain,

its writer beauty, reading this feel comes, Kashi feeling pain now, clap for you,👏

But this was awesome once again! Probably a little teeny meeny less brilliant than the previous one but this did have pain, agony and frustration!

My favourite line : the love that empowers does weaken. So true! Really very true and the entire crux of all heartbreaks.

You're a magician who charms with words <33

So sorry again. The loss was all mine, I stayed away from such a beautiful piece 😳

Muahhh. <3