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Originally posted by: Rubygill528

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Chapter 1,...very interesting. 👏 👏 . next chapter update soon dear 😊

Hi sparkler (sorry don't know ur name)

Really nice start.

Epilogue: awww!!!!! A small kid was left deliberately at the station. My heart went out to the kid. Thank God the man took him to the orphanage though this is not good for any one.

You gave the nice touch to Ranvir's connection to the harmonica. Amazing creativity there.
I m sure this man would be the important link to the present.

I m guessing now this man might be Mr. Aditya shrivastva (Anchal's dad) coz he came mumbai too for his job.

Interesting

Part 1: mystery start. I m guessing here too the girl who took the signature mission is Anchal. Well, let's see.

Ranvir n Kabir talks too fishy fishy. Their game rules talk is foreshadowing of their future equation.

Once again u linked Anchal's dad death to Raichands. Nice twist this is.

And now AanVir meeting. Literally blazing n dhamakedaar face off. She spanked him already. This reminds me of the Anchal in first couple of episodes.

Kabir too seems like the promo one kabir. Impulsive and hasty but emotional too for his bade.

Now you built up the platform for the story. Really looking forward to some RACE kinda story.

Continue soon


Cheers
Neen