A poem by Sameer

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hii everyone I have written a poem . It is based on the present scenario and represent Sameer's present feelings for Naina.

I know it is not that good but I have tried my level best while writing it.

So here it is...

Tujhse door raha nhi jaata

Hazaar koshishein karne k baad bhi

Mera dil mujhe teri or hi kheech lata h...

Dil pe patthar rakhke jo main yeh kar rha hoon

Koi mujhse pooche main har roz hazaar mautein mar rha hoon

Maaf krna meri jaan

Tujhse kitna pyaar h tujhe akhiri baar bta bhi na paaunga

Tu rehna khush

Tere bina to main muskura bhi na paaunga...

Tune toh bas mujhe khushi dii h

Maine tujhe bas aahsuon ki vajah dii h

Jaate jaate bhi bas gham dunga tujhe,

Par mujhe patthar na samajhna

Kyunki,

Palke toh yha meri bhi bheegi h...

Par dooriyan kitni bhi aa jaayein,

Tu hi meri pehli mohabbat h

Aur tu hi aakhiri hogi

Tu hi meri ek-lauti khwahish h

Jo kabhi na poori hogi

Bas gham yhi h,

Ki hamari prem kahani hamesha adhoori hogi...

Adhoori hogi ...

Adhoori hogi...

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That's all for now friends

Plz do comment and tell me how do you all find it.

Waiting for your response😳

With lots of love

Aishwarya😳

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Shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Aish dear!

This is so beautiful and the language adds more beauty to it ❤️

The second and fourth stanza is so nice to read, coming from his point of view😳

Thank you for the beautiful treat!

Keep coming with more.

Love,

Shreya

Edited by Mayashika - 8 years ago

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika
Hey Aish dear!
This is so beautiful and the language adds more beauty to it ❤️
The second and fourth stanza is so nice to read, coming from his point of view😳
Thank you for the beautiful treat!
Keep coming with more.
Love,
Shreya

Thank you so much dear 😊 your feedback really means a lot to me 🤗a big hug for you

Again thank you so much

Lots of love to you

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Seema

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi Aiswarya, beautiful poem. Really heart touching lines. Keep it up.

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suhaaniladki

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Posted: 8 years ago

The poem is so beautiful and heart touching ... Kya yaar why dont sameer understand pyaar chod k bhagne mei nai hai balki har musibat mei uske sath firmly khade rehne mei hai ...

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Chaaru

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is so beautiful 👏

It perfectly matches with the current situation and Sameer's feeling.

Do write more.

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Ross11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing Poem!👏

loved this line very much 👍🏼

Koi mujhse pooche main har roz hazaar mautein mar rha hoon

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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hayye ..meri behna rula dia mujhe ..

I already know about your superb writing skills ..glad you came up with the post and let your poem and thoughts behind it be heard ..

The poem was " perfect " ..it really suited sameer's present condition ..all broken , shattered

I've already read it twice and now going to read again

This poem of yours is mirror of Sameer's lonely self ..

Now I'm waiting to this track to come to an end ..and honestly Sameer disserves another tight slap by my hero munna and a lecture by Naina ..

I'm sooo proud of you my girl ..keep up the good work

Suggestions - utilize your free time ..bol bol ke thak gai

Write something on my samaina

Waiting to Read more from you ( poems as well as stories )

I hope you will soon come up with something

Lastly you deserve a pat on your back for this my little sister

Love

Laalchi reader

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: JaySee
Hi Aiswarya, beautiful poem. Really heart touching lines. Keep it up.

Thank you so much Jayshree di😊

Lots of love for you

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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
The poem is so beautiful and heart touching ... Kya yaar why dont sameer understand pyaar chod k bhagne mei nai hai balki har musibat mei uske sath firmly khade rehne mei hai ...

Thank you so much dear😛

Yes Sameer needs to understand that...

Don't worry Naina and Mundit will make him understand

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