Gehra Hua...Deeper it became...Aryaman Ahana Radhika FS

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#1

Gehra Hua...Deeper it became...Part 1

The credit for the edits of Praghav,Radhika,Ahana and AryaHana goes to the unknown editors.The other edits and the cover page are made by me with the help of AI.

A couple and their daughters are seen happy together They were Raghav Pragati and their sweet daughters Ahana and Radhika.They were dressed like shape shifting serpents.

A middle named man entered their house.He was Raghav's friend Parmeet.He was stunned to see their appearance.

Parmeet:Guess I reached the wrong house.By mistake I got inside naaglok.So many shape-shifting serpents here.

They felt like laughing.

Raghav:Hey Parmeet...this is not naaglok.You have reached the right house.We are taking reels. My wife and my daughters are the big fans of the TV serial Naagin. So they are making reels wearing naagin costumes.They got me also involved in it.

Pragati:Because we naagins want a naag too.

Parmeet laughed.

Ahana:I am making one reel with your son Aryaman also Parmeet uncle.

Parmeet:Really?So funny.

He chuckled.



Parmeet's son Aryaman and Ahana are working together in an IT company. During the free time both were shooting for a reel.Ahana who was dressed like a naagin was with Aryaman in the rain.

Aryaman:I wish it was not just a reel,but real.

Ahana felt like laughing.

Ahana:You want us to be shape shifting serpents in real?

Aryaman said in his mind:I want our romance to be real Ahana.

Ahana checked the phone and said in excitement:Before our shoot I had posted our last reel.Within such a limited time the reel got so many likes.I am so happy.

Aryaman smiled.



Parmeet,Aryaman and Ravish were in the dining room.Ravish is Aryaman's youngest brother.He was busy messaging someone on the phone.

Parmeet:Ravish beta...eat..

Ravish:Dad...can't you see me messaging.How can I eat now?

Ravish walked away with the phone.

Parmeet told Aryaman:Aryaman,you should think of getting married.

Aryaman:Why are you not telling Ravish to get married?

Parmeet:I am not worried about him.He is always on the phone.That means he has already found his life partner.But I am worried about you.You are not talking or messaging anyone on the phone.

Aryaman:You will be the first father who is sad that his son doesn't have a girl friend.

Aryaman smiled.

Ravish told someone on the phone:You are so beautiful Suzie.Now give me a kiss.

Suzie kissed the phone.


(This edit is half AI and half mine)

Ravish smiled shyly.

Ravish:I wish the kiss was for me.

Suzie:I gave the kiss to you only.

Ravish:Yes.But you kissed on the phone.I wish you had kissed me instead of the phone.

Suzie became shy.



Radhika wore an ultra modern dress at night.

Ahana:Why are you dressed up like this?Are you going anywhere?

Radhika:Ya.I am going out.

Ahana was stunned.

Ahana:Where are you going?

Radhika:I am going to the pub.

Ahana:No dear.Don't go to the pub now.Go and sleep.

Radhika became upset.

Radhika:Di...please...

Ahana:No baby.It's not safe to go to the pub at this time.

Radhika:Why di?My friends are also going to the pub.

Ahana:Let them do whatever they want.But I want my little sister to be safe.So you don't go now.

Radhika got frustrated and went to her room.




Radhika wore an ultra modern dress to go to college.

Ahana:What kind of dress have you worn Radhika?Change it.Wear a decent dress.

Radhika got irritated.

Radhika:Why di?You also wear modern dresses.

Ahana:Yes.But we should dress according to the situation.You are having a presentation today.Right?

You should be modest in dressing.You are going to study, not to a fashion show.So change it.

Radhika got irritated and walked to her room.

Radhika:I don't even have the freedom to wear the dress which i like.I hope Ahana di will get married and leave this house soon.Then I can live like a free bird according to my wish.

She wore a normal jeans and top and went out of her room.

Ahana:Now my baby looks nice.All the best for your presentation Radhu.

Radhika replied seriously:Thank you.

She just left the house.


Radhika did the presentation in college and everyone appreciated her.She became very happy.



Aryaman was sleeping and dreaming of Ahana.

He imagined dancing with Ahana romantically.


Tu agar meri, yeh hawayen teri
Tu agar meri, saari raahein teri
Tu agar meri, main hoon tera
Tu agar meri, yeh ujaale tere
Tu agar meri, dil hawale tere
Tu agar meri, main hoon tera




Betaab-sa mohabbat ka tu inqalaab hai
Mera jahaan teri baahon mein khwaab, khwaab hai

Gehra hua, gehra hua
Rang aashiqui gehra hua
Gehra hua, gehra hua
Dariya-dua gehra hua
Tera hua

Tu agar meri, yeh hawayen teri
Tu agar meri, saari raahein teri
Tu agar meri, main hoon tera

Palkein jhapakta hai aasmaan
Laakhon farishton ki hai tu jaan
Woh poochhte hain, "Rehti kahaan?"
Meri baahon mein rehti, unko bata
Palkein jhapakta hai aasmaan
Usne bhi tujh-sa dekha kahaan
Hai raunakien wahan, tu hai jahaan
Meri baahon mein rehna, yahi hai dua




Tu agar meri, hai fasaana tera
Tu agar meri, toh zamaana tera
Tu agar meri, main hoon tera

Betaab-sa mohabbat ka tu inqalaab hai
Mera jahaan teri baahon mein khwaab, khwaab hai

Gehra hua, gehra hua
Rang aashiqui gehra hua
Tera hua

Tu agar meri, yeh hawayen teri
Tu agar meri, saari raahein teri
Tu agar meri, main hoon tera

Ni-sa-ga-sa-ga-ma-pa-ga-ma-re
Ni-sa-ga-sa-ga-ma-pa-ga-re-sa
Ni-sa-ga-sa-ga-ma-pa-ga-ma-re
Ni-sa-ga-sa-ga-ma-pa-ga-re-sa

Teri mohabbat mein jalna bhi hai
Aur tujhse bachke hi chalna bhi hai
Kuch rang apna badalna bhi hai
Maine dhalna tere rang mein hai sada
Tu chaand hai ek dhadakta hua
Chori se mujhko hi takta hua
Seene se lag ke chamakta hua
Meri jannat ka rasta, tu hi tu hua



Tu agar meri, yeh hawayen teri
Tu agar meri, saari raahein teri
Tu agar meri, main hoon tera

Betaab-sa mohabbat ka tu inqalaab hai
Mera jahaan teri baahon mein khwaab, khwaab hai

Gehra hua, gehra hua
Rang aashiqui gehra hua
Gehra hua, gehra hua
Dariya-dua gehra hua
(Dhurandhar).

Parmeet sat near him and caressed him lovingly.

Aryaman imagined Ahana and held Parmeet's hand.He said:I love you.

Parmeet became emotional.

Parmeet:Even in deep sleep my son loves me a lot.I love you too beta.

Aryaman opened his eyes and got shocked to see Parmeet.

Aryaman:Dad!

Edited by jasminerahul - 2 months ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

43

Views

1.3k

Users

7

Likes

68

Frequent Posters

khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail 18th Anniversary Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 2 months ago
#2

Part 1

Amazing update... well written


thanks for the pm

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#3

Ahana is looking out for her sister, but for Radhika, the whole thing is too controlling.

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#4

Aryaman is in love but did not have the courage to say it to Ahana.

Amunra.Gold thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#5


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


heavenlybliss thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#6

Radhika is so rebellious I think she will get herself in trouble

Surilikoyal thumbnail
Screen Detective 2 Participant Thumbnail Caption Writing Contest Participant Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 2 months ago
#7

Awesome update Jasmine.All the edits are beautiful.Especially Ravish Suzie onesmiley32Ravish is Parmeet's youngest son right.It's written Aryamann's youngest son.Parmeet is worried about Aryamann's marriage and not Ravish since he doesn't have gf that was funny.Radhika is a spoilt brat.Good that she listens to her sister Ahana.Gehra hua.Lovely song. Aryamann dreaming about Ahana .He is in love with her.After he wakes up in shock that scene is good.Thanks for the tag.

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#8

Thanks a lot for pointing out my careless mistake.I have corrected it.

I was waiting for your comment.Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Awesome update Jasmine.All the edits are beautiful.Especially Ravish Suzie onesmiley32Ravish is Parmeet's youngest son right.It's written Aryamann's youngest son.Parmeet is worried about Aryamann's marriage and not Ravish since he doesn't have gf that was funny.Radhika is a spoilt brat.Good that she listens to her sister Ahana.Gehra hua.Lovely song. Aryamann dreaming about Ahana .He is in love with her.After he wakes up in shock that scene is good.Thanks for the tag.

salley145 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 2 months ago
#9

Surprising that they're making reels in naagin get up. Aryanta reel was romantic. Ravish and Suzi's scene and edit is so cute. Surprisingly here Ahana is the elder sister. Radhika thinks Ahana is controlling but she is caring for her. Dance edits are lovely. Aryamann and Parmeet's scene was hilarious. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#10


coderlady

Heavenlybliss

Surili

Salley

khwaishfan

GOLDIEE ABROL 🇮🇳


Thank you so much for the lovely comments friends.



Gehra Hua...Deeper it became...Part 2

Parmeet sat near him and caressed him lovingly.

Aryaman imagined Ahana and held Parmeet's hand.He said:I love you.

Parmeet became emotional.

Parmeet:Even in deep sleep my son loves me a lot.I love you too beta.

Aryaman opened his eyes and got shocked to see Parmeet.

Aryaman:Dad!

Aryaman:When did you come here dad?

Parmeet:When you said I love you to me.You love me this much my son?I became so emotional.

He wiped his wet eyes with a smile.

Aryaman:I love you dad.but that "I love you" was not for you.

Parmeet:Then to whom did you say that?I am the only father you have.Did any other old idiot come to claim you?Why did you say "i love you" to me?Did anyone who looks like me visit you and you mistook me for him?Don't believe him even if he is my look alike.

Aryaman:Stop your rubbish talk dad.I was thinking of Ahana and said 'I love you'.

Parmeet smiled:So that "I love you" was for Ahana.

Parmeet became emotional.

Aryaman:Now why the hell are you feeling emotional?

Parmeet:Because you obeyed me and found a girl for yourself.

Aryaman:I didn't obey you suddenly dad.I love Ahana since my teenage.

Parmeet was surprised:You and Ahana are lovers since teenage?I didn't know that.You defeated Ravish too in love.

Aryaman:No dad.Ahana doesn't even know that I love her.

Parmeet:You have not confessed your love to her yet?

Aryaman:No.

Parmeet:You don't even have the guts to confess your love to the girl you love?I am ashamed of you.I wrote thousands of love letters to your mom.But you have not written even one love letter?Take a piece of paper.I will make you write a love letter now.

Aryaman:Dad,this is not 80's or 90's. Who will write love letters now?

Parmeet:Writing love letters has a special beauty my son.Take a piece of paper.I will reach you to write love letters.

Aryaman took the note pad.

Parmeet:I will dictate.You will write.

Aryaman:Ok.

Parmeet:

"My dear Ahana darling...

You are the queen of my heart.You are the queen of my salt factory.My love for you tastes like salt.Like Shah Jahan built Taj mahal for Mumtaz Mahal,I will built a palace of salt for you.

Aryaman:How cringe is this dad!You have salt business.That doesn't mean that in every sentence you will write about salt.

Parmeet:Don't insult my salt business.Without salt can you eat food?I became a rich man because of salt.

Aryaman:But this love letter has no standard dad.

Parmeet:Don't insult my love letters.Your mother fell in love with me because of my love letters.That's why you and Ravish were born.

Aryaman:I think mom had heart attack reading your love letters.

Parmeet:What?

Aryaman walked away.




Ravish held Suzie's hair and said:Your hair is losing it's thickness.I will get you a good shampoo.

Suzie:To hell with your shampoo!After using your shampoo only my hair started losing it's thickness.Since you are doing shampoo business you are experimenting everything on my hair.

Ravish was embarrassed.

Suzie:You try your new shampoo on your dog.

Ravish:What if it loses hair?

Suzie:You have no problem with my hair loss.But you have problem with your dog losing hair?

Ravish:If you lose your hair you can lose wigs.You can do hair fixing too.But a dog cannot use wig.Right?

Suzie was really irritated:How dare you?

Ravish got scared seeing her anger.

Ravish:Suzie...relax.You are becoming hot because of your anger.You need to be cool.For that let's go to the icecream parlour.

Hearing about icecream parlour Suzie's face blossomed.

Suzie:Icecream?

Ravish:Yes.

Suzie:Wow!

They both went to the icecream parlour and enjoyed having icecream.

(Created by me with the help of AI).

Pragati played music and pretended to sing by holding a mike.

Raghav was shooting it with his phone.

Pragati:I hope this reel gets millions of views.

Raghav:For sure sweet heart.

Pragati smiled.



Radhika was watching TV while having snacks.

Ahana went near her.

Ahana:Don't eat too much of oily snacks Radhika.It's not good for your skin.

The irritated Radhika kept the snacks on the table and took coco colaa to drink.

Ahana took it from her and said:Don't drink coco cola.It will ruin your health.

Radhika got angry.

Radhika:Don't you drink Coco Cola?Then why are you stopping me from drinking it?

Ahana:I do drink it once in a while.But now a days you are drinking it always.Don't harm your health like this Radhu.And instead of watching TV you sit and study.Your exams are going to start.

Radhika:You are more strict than dad and mom.

Pragati:Though I am your mother,it's Ahana who looked after you like a mother.She was so happy when you were born.

Radhika:Di was happy when I was born because she wanted a toy.

Radhika walked to her room in irritation.

Pragati and Ahana just smiled.

Pragati:She is so childish.

Raghav:Because her mom is childish even in this age.

Pragati stared at Raghav:Raghav!

Raghav had a pale smile on his face.Seeing her angry eyes,slowly he moved away from her.

She chased him while he ran.Ahana laughed.



Aryaman met Radhika.

Aryaman:Radhika...I want to tell you something.

Radhika:Say fast Aryaman.You have been telling this since last 10 minutes.I have no time to waste.

Aryaman:I...I...I love...

Radhika was stunned.

Radhika:You love me Aryaman?


Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 1 months ago

The return of life Part 1 I dedicate this story to Salley who wants me to write an Aryaman Radhika story with Erul and Parmeet as their fathers....

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 1 months ago

A Love Beyond Looks The credit for the proposal scene edits goes to naaginfan_22.The credit for the other edits goes to the unknown editors. The...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Sshesha · 1 months ago

BLURB Arjun Sharma had only one dream - to complete the engineering degree he abandoned after losing his parents and fulfill the future they had...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".