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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

😆So...I wrote a little poemy thingy...and seeing tonight's episode...thought best to "publish" it right away. Enjoy but If there are any faults...mujhe kalatfaimi mein rehne dejiye😆😆...

Rishta, Yeh Ek Pavitra Bandhan Jaisa,

Bin Mile Mann Ke Milan Jaisa,

Chehre Se Haathon Ka Parda Utha Hi Tha,

Ke, Aankhon Se Baiyaan Hua Kuch Pyaar Jaisa.

😊

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Monu-SunNaa

@Monu-SunNaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

Beautiful poem Rimz!! Btw what does Baiyaan mean?

Edited by $weet Ema - 17 years ago

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

It was beautifull!! Amazing!! You should write more!!! =D

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Saima

@sailat@PA

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

Maddy--Rima has previously written some amazing Michi FFs in the Kayamath forum!!

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Roshni

@Roshni.

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

Wah Wah! Kya poem tha!

Mindblowing yaar!

Rima...Why dont to you start an FF here? It'll be a treat to read! Please do think about writing....if you are free!

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

Rims in action... wah wah wah wah... bayaan to ab ho hii jaaye.... waisey aapka andaaz-e-bayaan bhi humain buhut pasand aaya.

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parminder kaur

@parminderkaur

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

well done yaar keep it up 👍🏼

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GHT_ArMan

@GHT_ArMan

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

wah wah..SubhanAllah..plz write more on ArMan:)

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

GoldenPanda., Blackdaughter, mou.kundu100, Parminder, Saima and Yas: Thanks you guys sooooooooooo much!!! 🤗😃

And Yas...🤔Baiyaan means to express I believe...

rosh.88: Thanks hun😃...will think about the FF...but the shows going great at the moment...we don't need an FF to distract us just yet😉...and perhaps you don't know but we also have JC and Munee amongst us who are just freaking awesome writers...I think we should impore them too...

Muneeza: Hai...aansoon aa gaye tareef ke baad!😭 Hehe...Thanks so much! And big Jhappi from meeeeeeeeeeee🤗