FF-KAB KYUN KEISSE-last part updated pg59

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..
me first!!!!

awesome part amita!!!!!!!!! 😳

ooooooo robbie wants to spend time with just kasturi in their bedroom...................................hot!!!! ☺️ 😉

keep up the good work!!! 👍🏼

Hinna

Thanks a lot yaar!

Glad u liked it😛

Keep on reading ahead😊

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#442

PART 80 (KAB KYUN KEISSE)

Robbie and Kasturi spend only five minutes in the party going on downstairs.....and then Robbie winks at Kasturi and they both go upstairs in their bedroom.........

Kasturi: Yeh kya Robbie......thodi der aur ruk sakte the na!

Robbie: Why?
Kasturi: Sab kya kahenge?
Robbie: Logon ka kaam hain kehna darling!!

Kasturi: Robbie!!!!!!
Robbie: Kasturi....meri jaan!!!! Dusron ke fiqar karna chhodo!

Kasturi: Kyun?
Robbie: Arre baba....tum ne hi toh kaha tha...five minutes! Toh ho gaye na!

Kasturi: Ok baba....theek hain phir!!!!

Robbie: Toh?
Kasturi: Toh kya?
Robbie: Shuru karein?
Kasturi: K....kya?

Robbie: Wahi...joh hum karne aaye hain!

Kasturi: Matlab? Kya karne aaye hain hum yahan? Hum toh bas.....

Robbie: Kasturi hum toh............

Suddenly Kasturi starts having labour pains.........and Robbie is panicked! He goes downstairs and tells everybody about that!

Robbie: Reva didi!!

Reva: What happened Robbie? You look worried!!!!
Robbie: Kasturi.....

Reva: Kya hua Kasturi ko? Is she alright?? Kuch toh bolo!

Robbie: Kasturi ko labour pains aana shuru ho gaya hain!

Reva: What? Toh humein usse jaldi hospital le jaana padega!

Robbie: Sab ko please kahiye ke.....

Reva: You don't worry Robbie....I'll handle everything!!!!

Robbie takes Kasturi to the hospital.....She's totally in pain but her pain stops as soon as Robbie holds her hand firmly to his.

The Chawlas reach on time and Kasturi is in the Operation Theatre! The countdown begins:

10

9

8

7

6

5

4

3

2

1.............👏👏👏AND TWINS ARE BORN👏👏👏

Robbie: Thanks for this beautiful gift Kasturi!

Kasturi: It's okay Robbie....aur gift nahin....gifts kaho!

Robbie: Of course! Toh naam kya rakhenge?
Kasturi: Arre.....humne toh decide kiya tha na!

Robbie: Haan.....toh dekho...apne bete ho mein rockstar banaaounga!

Kasturi: Nahin...Woh actor benega!

Robbie: Apni beti ko tum actress banao....

Kasturi: Nahin....woh toh model banegi!!!!!!!

And here ends the beautiful lovestory of the two eternal lovers........Their love is immortal.............ROKA FOREVER...........

Thank you all my fellow Kasturians who've read my FF!

Love you guys soooooo much! Take care😛

Amita😃

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nehaaa nawab

@nehaaa nawab

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#443

m really sorry for ma late comments.... oh ma god why did u end ur fanfic, it was such beautiful fanfic..... the ending was really nice but i wanted more, what about the twist u were going to bring in, i was waiting for that........ R u going to come up with another fanfic...? m feeling soooo sad😭😭

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab
m really sorry for ma late comments.... oh ma god why did u end ur fanfic, it was such beautiful fanfic..... the ending was really nice but i wanted more, what about the twist u were going to bring in, i was waiting for that........ R u going to come up with another fanfic...? m feeling soooo sad😭😭

Hey.........don't be sad at all........will come up with another FF very soon............that's why I ended this one!

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sonia

@reenbana

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#445

hi amita how r u? sorry yaar maine pehle comment nahi kia i was very depressed u know na my mom is no more thts why plz pray for her soul rest in peace! n ur ff was fantastic superb !

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#446

amitaaaaaaaaaaa......i dnt kno wha emoticon to give yu 😃 or 😡

😃 because it was a fabulous part!!!!! and 😡 because yu've ended yur ff?!!!!!!! kab?????????kyun???????????????? keisse????????? 😆 lol

okay leme comment on yur ff 1st then i'll have a word wiv yu....

awesome part huni!!!! 👏 absolutely loved it!!!!! 😳

very romantic 😳 and sexy ☺️ and adorable 😛 all at the same time!!!!

wow RoKa had twins!!!!!! 😃 how cute!!!!!! 😛 😳

absolutely beautiful!!! 👏

okay so why r yu ending yur beatiful ff amita?!! 😒 bol?!!! i love reading it yaar!!

oooo i jus read yur gna start another one??!! kwl!!!! 😃 fine fine i'll let yu off then!!! 😆

Thanks 4 writing such a beautiful and fantastic ff amita and entertaining us with rocking scenes of RoKa!!! 😃 👏 Looking forward 2 yur next ff!! 😛

Keep rocking!!! 😉

Hinna xx

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: reenbana
hi amita how r u? sorry yaar maine pehle comment nahi kia i was very depressed u know na my mom is no more thts why plz pray for her soul rest in peace! n ur ff was fantastic superb !

That's ok yaar!

Oh....I'm so sorry to hear about your mom! May her soul rest in peace!

Thanks for liking my FF!

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Jazz Rocks

@JasminBhasinFan

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..
amitaaaaaaaaaaa......i dnt kno wha emoticon to give yu 😃 or 😡
😃 because it was a fabulous part!!!!! and 😡 because yu've ended yur ff?!!!!!!! kab?????????kyun???????????????? keisse????????? 😆 lol

okay leme comment on yur ff 1st then i'll have a word wiv yu....

awesome part huni!!!! 👏 absolutely loved it!!!!! 😳

very romantic 😳 and sexy ☺️ and adorable 😛 all at the same time!!!!

wow RoKa had twins!!!!!! 😃 how cute!!!!!! 😛 😳

absolutely beautiful!!! 👏

okay so why r yu ending yur beatiful ff amita?!! 😒 bol?!!! i love reading it yaar!!

oooo i jus read yur gna start another one??!! kwl!!!! 😃 fine fine i'll let yu off then!!! 😆

Thanks 4 writing such a beautiful and fantastic ff amita and entertaining us with rocking scenes of RoKa!!! 😃 👏 Looking forward 2 yur next ff!! 😛

Keep rocking!!! 😉

Hinna xx