Smitar's: Marrying Khushi#3 Part 24 Pg 105 (4/12)Link to #4 on Pg 1 - Page 78

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khareshelley

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Posted: 12 years ago

super cute update..!!!!
loved their dance..!!!
they kissed.😊😊
pls continue soon...!!!!!!!

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ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

now this is simply one hell intense chappy nd d song fitted perfctly wit d situation ☺️

their dance,hayeee nd d movemnts nd how khuhsi was all lost in his warm embrace nd sweet torture nd how he was supporting her,hayeee d whole dance was awsum ❤️

i loved it how she ran as soon as d song ended nd drank water feeling all different wit d new tingling sensation nd finally she is sumwhere dreaming of her rakshas fulfilling all her secret wishes aftr marriage nd finally d perfct lip kiss ☺️

beautiful chappy 👍🏼

loved it ❤️

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lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update! Thanks for the email.

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saschades

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Posted: 12 years ago

AAAH AWESOMEEE UPDATE loving all the loveydovey
thanks for the pm xx

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lovely

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Posted: 12 years ago

Next part jaldi post karo smita

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ameena671

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow superb update loved it.

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mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh that was beautiful.. Their dance and then their first kiss.. And "Main rang sharbaton ka" ☺️

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JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update just loved so asr kissed her and khushi is too falling for him. Sorry for the late comment.

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TheArshiCraze

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Posted: 12 years ago

THE FERRET!!😆😆😆 Hahahaha the ferret was the ideal touch to your ending! XD this was fabulous writing!

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